Dear Kieran Scott,

I just finished reading your book, "Brunettes Strike Back", which was a sequel to "I was a Non Blonde Cheerleader", and I enjoyed it, but not as much as the first one. I think it's just the way you wrote the first one that made it so interesting. You described everything so vividly that I could just imagine that I was there! That is a really cool technique that I wish I could perfect in writing. I love your style of writing and the way you can write about a teenager’s life as if you were one. It takes a lot to understand what really goes on in between a teenager’s brain, and you do a good job when you write it out.

I think the story is a little too predictable. Maybe if you made something happen between Annisa and Daniel that your readers wouldn’t expect, it would make the story more interesting. I always want to know what is going to happen next, and if I already know, it makes the story lessexciting. I just think that would make your book better.

Besides all that I really enjoyed the book, but a few things happen in the story that make me ponder…Why didn’t Annisa remember Phoebe’s problems with her parents? I thought that made the story kind of odd because when Phoebe started acting weird, it immediately jogged my memory. This conflict in the story, however, did make the whole book more dramatic and it was a good touch.

At the back of the book, it says that you are working on a third sequel. & I can’t wait to read it ;D